http://blog.denverbroncos.com/archives/broncos-cardinals-pregame-notes/ Sun, 19 May 2013 17:27:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 http://blog.denverbroncos.com/archives/broncos-cardinals-pregame-notes/comment-page-1/#comment-4133 Dekreybroncofan Fri, 31 Aug 2007 21:38:16 +0000 http://blog.denverbroncos.com/mason/2007/08/30/broncos-cardinals-pregame-notes/#comment-4133 Hey Andrew, I know you are the Managing editor so I thought I would offer an opinion (witch you know what they say about those) "They are like >>> everyone has one and they all stink". Anyway I just got done reading a Story Called "Secondary Crunches Cardinals" by Christopher Smith. I didn’t find this story very appealing for the targeted audience. Although the parallelism used was semi creative I don’t really think football fans care about artistic expression in the form of words (well that’s not completely true). My mind just zoned off once I hit his part about a gem... Sorry if this comes off as me being a critical jerk and I am sure you can tell I’m not a writer myself, but I mean for this to come off more like a quick tip. Take it or leave it. Hey Andrew,
I know you are the Managing editor so I thought I would offer an opinion (witch you know what they say about those) “They are like >>> everyone has one and they all stink”. Anyway I just got done reading a Story Called “Secondary Crunches Cardinals” by Christopher Smith. I didn’t find this story very appealing for the targeted audience. Although the parallelism used was semi creative I don’t really think football fans care about artistic expression in the form of words (well that’s not completely true). My mind just zoned off once I hit his part about a gem… Sorry if this comes off as me being a critical jerk and I am sure you can tell I’m not a writer myself, but I mean for this to come off more like a quick tip. Take it or leave it.

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